Today is day one of the First Fight/First Kiss blogfest hosted by Danielle and Jackie. Up first we're supposed to share the first fight, be it physical or verbal, between our MCs. I decided to share a fight scene from my most recent novel (adult UF) between the main character Selene and love interest Micah. Of course it takes a little time for the love to blossom ;). They actually spend a good part of the novel being at odds. Enjoy!
“What’s up your butt?” I
asked, leaning my hip against the edge of his desk. Okay, maybe that wasn’t the
best opening line I could have come up with.
“You get on my last fucking
nerve, do you know that?” Micah said. He was staring very decidedly at his
computer screen although it was booting up so there wasn’t anything of interest
to see there.
“I get that from a lot of
people,” I said. “And even some ghosts. What I don’t get about you though is
why I work your poor nerves so badly.”
“You’re reckless and you get
everything handed to you, how’s that to start?” Micah said, angry eyes finally
snapping to my face. “Andrew had me tailing you for weeks; he took me off
working with clients so I could build a report on you. After the first two
weeks I had enough dirt to warrant your reassignment or suspension, but Andrew
told me to keep following you, claiming he needed more evidence. Sounded more
to me like he was turning a blind eye towards the things you were doing.” He
shook his head. “If you were fucking Andrew he’d probably let you get away with
outright murder.” I almost had a reaction to those words then remembered that
he hadn’t accused me of anything; he’d said ‘if.” Instead of looking guilty, I
gave him a thin smile.
“I guess this is the part
where I defend myself, but I can’t do that,” I said. “I’m fully
aware of the choices I’ve made, Micah, and I don’t regret anything I’ve done.
If you ask me, my rule bending saved you and a lot of people in here from being
forced to do more than one necromancer circle, so I’d say I was doing everyone
a service.”
“Save it,” Micah said. “You just
don’t get it.”
“I really don’t,” I said,
shrugging. “But maybe it would be better if you didn’t let me bother you so
much. I got in trouble and am being punished, and that’s my business,
why let it be such an issue for you?”
“Because,” he said sharply,
and I was a little taken aback by the intensity in his voice. He looked away. “Never mind. You’re not worth it.”
“Precisely,” I said brightly, though there was a little part
of me that withered when he’d said I wasn’t worth it.
Looking forward to sharing their first kiss on Thursday!
Great job here! Love the tension between your characters!
ReplyDeleteThanks for participating in our blogfest!
Great excerpt. I must read on. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat tension! Very good excerpt!
ReplyDeleteOoo, we get to see the fight first and then the kiss and make up. LOve it!
ReplyDeleteOhhh I love the banter and I'm a total swear-lover as well. I am one to put a swear word here and there.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great scene! Thanks for sharing in our blogfest!
Wow, harsh words at the end. Good interaction between the characters. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteI loved the verbal sparring. Great scene! :)
ReplyDeleteMan. Those two really get together? =)
ReplyDelete"I get that from a lot of people and even some ghosts"
ReplyDeleteLove it.