tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post5760465913576632646..comments2023-10-30T07:12:35.726-07:00Comments on A.J. Locke: 3rd Campainger ChallengeA.J. Lockehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08514343224203400113noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-37732831693926459342011-10-31T07:35:42.331-07:002011-10-31T07:35:42.331-07:00congrads on your award :)congrads on your award :)Shelli (srjohannes)https://www.blogger.com/profile/17123227845032402600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-7114966170504338212011-10-29T08:38:22.812-07:002011-10-29T08:38:22.812-07:00Nicely done! I love the crab! :)Nicely done! I love the crab! :)Katie Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17554091817717890150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-82728128832393601912011-10-27T10:24:41.442-07:002011-10-27T10:24:41.442-07:00Very nice, indeed. You're in the second round ...Very nice, indeed. You're in the second round of voting, so good luck.cleemckenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456109243453726483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-63355652726223911052011-10-24T13:40:32.753-07:002011-10-24T13:40:32.753-07:00Great entry. Loved the story and the imagery.Great entry. Loved the story and the imagery.Maeve Frazierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-5195700443461753122011-10-24T12:44:30.592-07:002011-10-24T12:44:30.592-07:00I am also a fan of your first line but liked the c...I am also a fan of your first line but liked the crab too. Nice job :)Claire Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16576410137759875223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-18047407390757820272011-10-23T15:27:15.509-07:002011-10-23T15:27:15.509-07:00Good story, I liked it.
mood
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Mood...Good story, I liked it.<br /><br />mood<br />(now following)<br /><a href="http://moodywriting.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Moody Writing</a><br /><a href="http://twitter.com/mooderino" rel="nofollow">@mooderino</a>mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-75491000911802238262011-10-22T11:35:49.271-07:002011-10-22T11:35:49.271-07:00Cute! I loved it. The details really sucked me in....Cute! I loved it. The details really sucked me in.Jessica Therrienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-74977297561510576632011-10-21T20:51:46.176-07:002011-10-21T20:51:46.176-07:00I like this a lot! The ending is very uplifting.
...I like this a lot! The ending is very uplifting. <br />Mine is #25.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12314617048592538691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-29883860265587683282011-10-20T17:48:03.406-07:002011-10-20T17:48:03.406-07:00I like the fact that you used a figurative smell r...I like the fact that you used a figurative smell rather than the literal smell most of the rest of us used. Great job!ruth.the.writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09854940988819225116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-8351638272777385092011-10-20T17:05:37.200-07:002011-10-20T17:05:37.200-07:00Great imagery! I agree with Sheri, I thought the ...Great imagery! I agree with Sheri, I thought the crab was really cute :)<br /><br />I'm entry #69 :)Alyssahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08978921042324206592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-66798927911698878502011-10-20T12:52:06.248-07:002011-10-20T12:52:06.248-07:00So cute! Love that Crab! ; )So cute! Love that Crab! ; )Sheri L. Swift, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08585820531737824211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-7926000048998177962011-10-20T10:48:38.138-07:002011-10-20T10:48:38.138-07:00Nice use of the words. I can totally see wastopnee...Nice use of the words. I can totally see wastopneer as being the name of a bird. Mine is #56Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-79280560991346047062011-10-20T10:23:17.740-07:002011-10-20T10:23:17.740-07:00Makes me wonder if she's going to have to kiss...Makes me wonder if she's going to have to kiss the crab and see him turn into a prince? (I think I really am the cheesiest person ever.) Your descriptions were so effective, and I could see every bit of the scene in front of me!<br /><br />A great read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-34651754461787789222011-10-20T06:40:29.582-07:002011-10-20T06:40:29.582-07:00Very nice. I'm there with you. =)Very nice. I'm there with you. =)E. Arroyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-45315385303154225662011-10-19T19:20:47.891-07:002011-10-19T19:20:47.891-07:00I agree with the crowd. I LOVE the first line. I c...I agree with the crowd. I LOVE the first line. I could feel what your MC was feeling. Lovely job :)Angela Cothranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09243582290698922119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-18541340524729150022011-10-19T15:48:21.223-07:002011-10-19T15:48:21.223-07:00This is great. I LOVE your first line. I have neve...This is great. I LOVE your first line. I have never heard anything like and have to give you a big cheer for that. I am a new follower and I love this post! Great job. :)<br /><br />I'm #58 if you want to check it out! :)<br /><br />And cool giveaway!Abby Fowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08567978659174723198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-2259086631764963082011-10-19T15:06:16.165-07:002011-10-19T15:06:16.165-07:00Your first line is hilarious! And the scene that f...Your first line is hilarious! And the scene that followed has a very sentimental feel to it. What a curious crab. Love it! Great job! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-35970759800320448632011-10-19T14:22:56.185-07:002011-10-19T14:22:56.185-07:00I really liked the opening image of the "hori...I really liked the opening image of the "horizon belching up the morning sun." Haha. Such a sweet vignette! Nice job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02708904894566620939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-25521521019557721872011-10-19T12:46:38.266-07:002011-10-19T12:46:38.266-07:00Oh I love the crab. Is that okay? Can I say I love...Oh I love the crab. Is that okay? Can I say I love the crab? Great use of the challenge words in here too. Lovely ending.K.T. Hannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477211734721721621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-45184605608534703022011-10-19T12:27:37.036-07:002011-10-19T12:27:37.036-07:00Great use of the words and I loved the ending. Nic...Great use of the words and I loved the ending. Nice foreshadowing too with the crab dancing in front of her. Enjoyed this very much.Joellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05813055817755602200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-48803459044459743272011-10-19T11:34:59.158-07:002011-10-19T11:34:59.158-07:00Love it. Great imagery. I could clearly see everyt...Love it. Great imagery. I could clearly see everything as if it were a movie! Wonderful entry. Following along :)<br /><br />I'm entry #5Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-59791595737811037892011-10-19T11:23:31.108-07:002011-10-19T11:23:31.108-07:00Your writing is very creative. I could clearly see...Your writing is very creative. I could clearly see the images in the story and everything blended very well. You're getting a vote from me :)Alynza Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09912072040743353688noreply@blogger.com