tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post450788977987802397..comments2023-10-30T07:12:35.726-07:00Comments on A.J. Locke: What If? Blogfest - Rapunzel's Tragic EndingA.J. Lockehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08514343224203400113noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-9465816811731051632013-02-12T22:56:21.538-08:002013-02-12T22:56:21.538-08:00I loved as much as you will receive carried out ri...I loved as much as you will receive carried out right here.<br />The sketch is attractive, your authored material stylish.<br /><br />nonetheless, you command get got an edginess over that you wish <br />be delivering the following. unwell unquestionably come further formerly again <br />as exactly the same nearly very often inside case you shield this hike.<br /><i>Here is my site</i> : <b><a href="http://mayunwana.com/index.php?title=Confirmed_Online_Individual_Loans" rel="nofollow">military payday loans</a></b>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-50378749066806888962012-08-25T12:42:28.858-07:002012-08-25T12:42:28.858-07:00Aw, this is wonderful. I love this resolution. Awe...Aw, this is wonderful. I love this resolution. Awesome. (:Kendra503https://www.blogger.com/profile/17126561543158857748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-27985229873826428042012-08-19T19:34:07.135-07:002012-08-19T19:34:07.135-07:00Poor Rapunzel.
A2Z Mommy and What’s In BetweenPoor Rapunzel.<br /><a href="http://a2zmommy.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">A2Z Mommy and What’s In Between</a>Tracy MacDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03615611919340469444noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-45393396014889596702012-08-18T07:54:17.592-07:002012-08-18T07:54:17.592-07:00Love this entry. It's so beautiful and scary, ...Love this entry. It's so beautiful and scary, but still has hope. :)Cassie Maehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17706774393186819619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-42132022614287138782012-08-17T13:43:10.537-07:002012-08-17T13:43:10.537-07:00It's tragic but I'm holding out hope that ...It's tragic but I'm holding out hope that the dove will arrive and maybe he can still save her.Tasha Seegmillerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11489911822054861132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-4722375518511001992012-08-17T11:53:37.642-07:002012-08-17T11:53:37.642-07:00Oh no poor Rapunzel! I am hopeful that she can sti...Oh no poor Rapunzel! I am hopeful that she can still be saved.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-69286584658667412362012-08-17T02:02:21.612-07:002012-08-17T02:02:21.612-07:00Very tragic. Great mood you've created. I was ...Very tragic. Great mood you've created. I was thinking maybe the dove would get to him after all. I'd love to read more!Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-28296209601569546882012-08-16T14:47:56.463-07:002012-08-16T14:47:56.463-07:00I loved this! The prose is so beautiful (and of co...I loved this! The prose is so beautiful (and of course, tragic). Thank you for sharing both versions. It was fantastic!<br /><br />Samantha<br /><a href="http://www.writingthroughcollege.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Writing Through College</a><br />Samantha Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09370961661054617338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-53846372039152236222012-08-15T23:17:47.765-07:002012-08-15T23:17:47.765-07:00Hi, AJ,
It's nice to meet you. I truly enjoy...Hi, AJ, <br /><br />It's nice to meet you. I truly enjoyed your excerpt. You have a subtle but dynamic style of writing. Terrific descriptions. <br /><br /><br />"It hopped closer, and when Rapunzel lifted a finger to stroke its soft breast, her body shuddered at the memory of his soft hair and how it used to give easily to the persuasion of her fingers." Loved this!<br />Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-16160004301810017502012-08-15T20:49:33.027-07:002012-08-15T20:49:33.027-07:00I read this first at the Requiem blog, and left my...I read this first at the Requiem blog, and left my comment there. I was completely enthralled by the entire concept; and I must say I like that the HEA is missing. This was satisfactory as written, but I'm glad I read the other, full excerpt first.<br /><br />Awesome writing AJ. I am glad the we met and shared a writing prompt.<br /><br />.....dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-59665714872403404522012-08-15T17:44:36.415-07:002012-08-15T17:44:36.415-07:00Oooh! I wanted to read more about the devil bangi...Oooh! I wanted to read more about the devil banging down her door. Going to check out the link. Well done. :)Mina Burrowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-43522981135468312412012-08-15T14:12:35.148-07:002012-08-15T14:12:35.148-07:00"A piece of her would be in the world where h..."A piece of her would be in the world where he was..."<br /><br />Ah, stab me in the heart. Beautiful tragic writing. ;)Nicolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680066584646789184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-69566286575150772322012-08-15T09:06:17.050-07:002012-08-15T09:06:17.050-07:00Da, da, daaaaa! (that's my evil music) Great e...Da, da, daaaaa! (that's my evil music) Great ending!Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-74366695959815916152012-08-15T06:53:27.697-07:002012-08-15T06:53:27.697-07:00Oh poor Rapunzel. Hopefully her man will come.
Thi...Oh poor Rapunzel. Hopefully her man will come.<br />This was beautiful!Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-37870653741669112832012-08-14T15:39:20.205-07:002012-08-14T15:39:20.205-07:00Awesome entry! Very heartbreaking and beautifully ...Awesome entry! Very heartbreaking and beautifully written!<br /><br />Thanks for being part of the fest!Leigh Covingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16377634002477171615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-77711249506031919122012-08-14T13:22:27.555-07:002012-08-14T13:22:27.555-07:00Nice job and maybe the prince will get the letter ...Nice job and maybe the prince will get the letter and save her in time???<br /><br />Thanks for participating - I'm a new follower :)Mark Koopmanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03634424953074803816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-17256601634855468742012-08-14T11:13:11.703-07:002012-08-14T11:13:11.703-07:00A true tragedy. Poor Rapunzel. My EntryA true tragedy. Poor Rapunzel. <a href="http://queendsheena.blogspot.com/2012/08/what-if-fairytale-madness-blogfest.html" rel="nofollow">My Entry</a><br />Sheena-kay Grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17712661419116636671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-30321364237690568382012-08-14T09:07:59.583-07:002012-08-14T09:07:59.583-07:00Poor Rapunzel. I can't imagine being stuck in...Poor Rapunzel. I can't imagine being stuck in a tower, knowing you had no way out. :(Lara Schiffbauerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13546286607078965432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-25083368570833325372012-08-14T00:14:38.643-07:002012-08-14T00:14:38.643-07:00The dove made a nice tragic addition! Charming!The dove made a nice tragic addition! Charming!JennaQuentinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06794730025120308897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-52641987923870185702012-08-13T21:47:05.082-07:002012-08-13T21:47:05.082-07:00Fantastic! Well conceived and written. Love it. Fantastic! Well conceived and written. Love it. Jamie McHenryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17844129434598954840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-81416056789589787062012-08-13T20:41:47.391-07:002012-08-13T20:41:47.391-07:00Very sad! Good twist, and I love this fairy tale! ...Very sad! Good twist, and I love this fairy tale! I hope she finds him... :)Cortney Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00774060537148628453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-28973644130218942172012-08-13T18:48:54.978-07:002012-08-13T18:48:54.978-07:00Very nice. This almost feels like the beginning o...Very nice. This almost feels like the beginning of her story, though...<br /><br />Lauren<br />Lauren-ritz.blogspot.comLaurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04137538450232783883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-92211679248827022882012-08-13T16:49:23.087-07:002012-08-13T16:49:23.087-07:00Gorgeous! Rapunzel has always been one of my favor...Gorgeous! Rapunzel has always been one of my favorite fairytales. Very heart wrenching indeed! :] Lexiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13944601428341180563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-13144574323438827472012-08-13T10:50:27.485-07:002012-08-13T10:50:27.485-07:00Eeeee! Your twist in the end shot me through the h...Eeeee! Your twist in the end shot me through the heart. lol. Poignant story. Enjoyed it so much. :)D. D. Falvohttp://www.drakaenwood.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796814667979836853.post-87083174803423943702012-08-13T08:11:24.370-07:002012-08-13T08:11:24.370-07:00What a sad ending! I hope she finds her prince som...What a sad ending! I hope she finds her prince someday :)Jennie Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331827076858223497noreply@blogger.com